Very funny!
Good work! I was very impressed.
A few notes: Definitely try to create more diversity in the voices. I sense similarities. No worries though. That will grow stronger in time and practice.
Also, more energy! You had a good vibe, but it's always important for a voice actor to NEVER hold back. Better more than less because you can easily pull it back. As a voice actor, you definitely wanna show you can give a lot.
You got some great and funny stuff in the works, and so much potential. I can already feel it. Keep it up!
Your fellow voice actor,
Tom S.